tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6061380174371002029.post8699541554497057165..comments2023-10-29T06:46:47.858-05:00Comments on brooke johnson's blog: world-buildingBrookehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09728905100557593958noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6061380174371002029.post-75559369096449816392010-10-20T09:39:02.777-05:002010-10-20T09:39:02.777-05:00I agree that there's a lot of info dumping goi...I agree that there's a lot of info dumping going on with first time writing. I started my last draft with about 6 pages of pure backstory, but I agree with taking it out and incooperating it in other ways.Judy Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15362029083974856672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6061380174371002029.post-37741748890413934392010-10-19T12:44:20.744-05:002010-10-19T12:44:20.744-05:00What you call info dump, I call characterization t...What you call info dump, I call characterization that could have led to a less abrupt opening.<br /><br />-Jerk Agent Who Rejected Your Work for Questionable ReasonsM.A. Morenohttp://s4.invisionfree.com/MJM_Productionsnoreply@blogger.com